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November 06, 2004

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Mona Rafi

Justin your post is very strong and informative, you have a strong thesis that exemplifies the theme of your post. However, there are a few things that you could do to improve the quality of the post. Your thesis should be bolded so that it is clear to the reader. Your post would be stronger if you changed the first sentence and made it less wordy. Through out your post your change verb tenses your post would be a lot better if you stuck to one tense. Overall it was a great post, good job.

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